rough draft essay 4

essay 4 rough draft

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  1. Hello Jesenia! This is a really good start to Essay 4. I also think your connection to softball is very strong because it’s current and personal. For your final draft, remember to choose at least one short story and two other pieces of literature we have read in class. Mother to Aon by Hughes is actually a poem, not a short story. You can still keep the connections you had with Mother to Sun because they’re great! Just be sure to add a short story and one other piece of literature to your final draft.

    Excellent so far,
    Cat G.

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  2. Hey so I like how you will explain ur topic but be more specific in the INTRO on why it made readers really think about their lives. -Start the intro with an explanation on your theme first.

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